Chris Graham, this is probably the comment you've been dreading most so let's get it over with... Here goes... lol =) I see improvement.
What do I think improved? 1. The message and the lyrics are better. 2. The song is more original. 3. The background is not so ghetto. It's cleaned up, and I think that's good. That sunset where ever that is is beautiful. 4. Chris is a handsome young man and I'm glad that was presented, not a hood rat, but a genuine person with true words. That's respectable. I like it. 5. He cleaned up some.
What I think needs improvements? 1. I don't feel he gave it 100%. Emotionally, I'm getting nothing. Express something... If you're mad, just be mad. Let it out. 2. Here's a box... think outside of it. Curse, throw something, talk about sex... lol... that's what Madonna did and she lasted long. 3. The shades are okay, but I like eyes. Your eyes are the gateway to your soul. If you're smoking too much and don't want to show the eyes, I understand. I just think if it's possible, you should let people see you are real. Look into their eyes and tell them something true. 4. I think I saw a pipe. I don't like it. I could laugh it off and say it's just tobacco, but I think it's something else. It's not attractive to me. 5. About the earrings, I don't like spacers. I like bling better. This has celebrity knock offs just for example. If you are ROYALTY, you need some bling. The earrings for the big spenders are like $10... http://www.kingice.com/Celebrity-Jewelry-100596.html I think you should be you, not another celeb, but you kind of get an idea. Maybe class up a little? You know FANCY was Drake's #1 song on AOL http://www.aolradioblog.com/2010/02/26/top-drake-songs/ That's why I think you should totally class up.
I wouldn't waste my time writing this if I didn't think you could do it. I think you're moving in the right direction. Keep a positive attitude. Believe in yourself. Ask other people what they like/dislike and let that guide you. Feedback is good, and I mean this in a good way... You're in the right direction so keep going. Love ♥ -M
People, OVO, OLIVER, NIKO, 40!!! My name is Bobby and im in a music group called the outcome.. basically i feel as if we have the potential to be something.. we write our own lyrics, make our own beats and produce our own videos.. our stuff just really needs to be heard.. please give us a chance and check this out?.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXsNCbpbpqQ
People, OVO, OLIVER, NIKO, 40!!! My name is Bobby and im in a music group called the outcome.. basically i feel as if we have the potential to be something.. we write our own lyrics, make our own beats and produce our own videos.. our stuff just really needs to be heard.. please give us a chance and check this out?.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXsNCbpbpqQ
@Anonymous ^ I def cosign. I read the comment last night and was like what? Really? We're all entitled to our opinion but homegirl was extra. I mean why isn't he good enough as is? Why does he need to manufacturer a look or an image? That's not keeping it real.
Yo Niko I saw you at the Drake concert at Penn State!. Standing in the back of the floor seats sporting the OVOXO Red and white varsity jacket. Hope you had a fun time up here in State College, PA!
This is my rap too light up/// If this a race to fame tell me where have ur tires gone/ I'd rather have no money than living in brim and firestone/ I don't need no sympathy I don't need ur gratitude/ I'm on another lattitude/ so please don't catch an attitude/ Yea nigga I write matta fact I am a writer/ Im not tryna converse unless u pullin out a lighter/ Right now im kinda high but i can get a little higher. I murder everything so u can call me michael myers- Yung Crow OVO
seriously @bonafide you sound like a bonafide idiot! Ghetto? Its hip hop & not no mid90's bad boy ish. What is wrong with you? This dude is dope and should not change a thing. Your lists stink.Class up a bit? Bitch please.
drake, we back on our hair routine today. My hairdreser best be having fun on vaca=) !! thank god i have no one to impress, i will wash& go ..dont play loooool
yo foreal though how can i get this i've looked on like the traditional download sites, the mainstream and the more anonymous and i can't find his songs, i'm loving the music though.
FULLY agree with that girl who made all the recommendations u need to step ur earring game up. SWAG needs to get turnt up a whole LOT to make it in the industry, can't juss be living off ur cuz.
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WOW I'm really feeling his lyrics... sick!! I love a traditional fighter's song! "If being real is a crime than convict me as a felony..."
All i i have to say is to good for words now take care
i hate this Blistex i bought...it makes my lips look crackish
bro u make me wanna wear some tights tonight ha! ive been meaning to open them
Please tell me how I can get this dudes mp3's, vinyl,CD... cassette. Sumtin...
nice video...song is hot
Awesome..True Art..Keep me comin back for more..
Much love,
Angela
Big ups lil cuz keep it comin
Chris Graham, this is probably the comment you've been dreading most so let's get it over with... Here goes... lol =) I see improvement.
What do I think improved?
1. The message and the lyrics are better.
2. The song is more original.
3. The background is not so ghetto. It's cleaned up, and I think that's good. That sunset where ever that is is beautiful.
4. Chris is a handsome young man and I'm glad that was presented, not a hood rat, but a genuine person with true words. That's respectable. I like it.
5. He cleaned up some.
What I think needs improvements?
1. I don't feel he gave it 100%. Emotionally, I'm getting nothing. Express something... If you're mad, just be mad. Let it out.
2. Here's a box... think outside of it. Curse, throw something, talk about sex... lol... that's what Madonna did and she lasted long.
3. The shades are okay, but I like eyes. Your eyes are the gateway to your soul. If you're smoking too much and don't want to show the eyes, I understand. I just think if it's possible, you should let people see you are real. Look into their eyes and tell them something true.
4. I think I saw a pipe. I don't like it. I could laugh it off and say it's just tobacco, but I think it's something else. It's not attractive to me.
5. About the earrings, I don't like spacers. I like bling better. This has celebrity knock offs just for example. If you are ROYALTY, you need some bling. The earrings for the big spenders are like $10... http://www.kingice.com/Celebrity-Jewelry-100596.html I think you should be you, not another celeb, but you kind of get an idea. Maybe class up a little? You know FANCY was Drake's #1 song on AOL http://www.aolradioblog.com/2010/02/26/top-drake-songs/ That's why I think you should totally class up.
I wouldn't waste my time writing this if I didn't think you could do it. I think you're moving in the right direction. Keep a positive attitude. Believe in yourself. Ask other people what they like/dislike and let that guide you. Feedback is good, and I mean this in a good way... You're in the right direction so keep going.
Love ♥
-M
goodstuff bro, you sound really orignal
People, OVO, OLIVER, NIKO, 40!!! My name is Bobby and im in a music group called the outcome.. basically i feel as if we have the potential to be something.. we write our own lyrics, make our own beats and produce our own videos.. our stuff just really needs to be heard.. please give us a chance and check this out?.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXsNCbpbpqQ
People, OVO, OLIVER, NIKO, 40!!! My name is Bobby and im in a music group called the outcome.. basically i feel as if we have the potential to be something.. we write our own lyrics, make our own beats and produce our own videos.. our stuff just really needs to be heard.. please give us a chance and check this out?.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXsNCbpbpqQ
4 milli twitter followers drake congrats!!! ya sista luvs ya;p
muah muahmuah muah muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuah!!; )
@Bonafide
Your comments always get on my nerves! No one cares what you think so stop it!
@Anonymous ^ I def cosign. I read the comment last night and was like what? Really? We're all entitled to our opinion but homegirl was extra. I mean why isn't he good enough as is? Why does he need to manufacturer a look or an image? That's not keeping it real.
Yo Niko I saw you at the Drake concert at Penn State!. Standing in the back of the floor seats sporting the OVOXO Red and white varsity jacket. Hope you had a fun time up here in State College, PA!
drake, go make me some pancake. pleeeeeease
beyond weak><><
This is my rap too light up///
If this a race to fame tell me where have ur tires gone/ I'd rather have no money than living in brim and firestone/ I don't need no sympathy I don't need ur gratitude/ I'm on another lattitude/ so please don't catch an attitude/ Yea nigga I write matta fact I am a writer/ Im not tryna converse unless u pullin out a lighter/ Right now im kinda high but i can get a little higher. I murder everything so u can call me michael myers- Yung Crow OVO
http://i44.tinypic.com/35avx94.jpg
Drake, the logo is polo
Royalty's so Flowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
where can i download?
Can't wait til Tuesday, everyone would have heard drizzy's story.
Take Care!
seriously @bonafide you sound like a bonafide idiot! Ghetto? Its hip hop & not no mid90's bad boy ish. What is wrong with you? This dude is dope and should not change a thing. Your lists stink.Class up a bit? Bitch please.
this junt is hottt. keep em comin
1 day left aubrey....
why was your tour so short? U doing another one soon? please say yes smh. Ur tour was like an hour long ahahaha.. 6 days?? entirely too short main
drake, we back on our hair routine today. My hairdreser best be having fun on vaca=) !! thank god i have no one to impress, i will wash& go ..dont play loooool
were doing coconut oil treatment today...it wont be hot tho. Lol. just oil treatment
wow drake. U spelled Kevin Durant's name wrong: http://cdn.drizzydrake.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Drake-Thank-YouTake-Care.jpg
doesnt anybody spell check for u??
yo foreal though how can i get this i've looked on like the traditional download sites, the mainstream and the more anonymous and i can't find his songs, i'm loving the music though.
I just love the way you work. Thanks for sharing this great and interesting stuff. Fabulous post! I really enjoyed that.
You can really make me wanna wear some tights tonight ha! I've been meaning to open them.
Big Pushers in ya back but anyways - bad singer.. let it be.
peace tho
FULLY agree with that girl who made all the recommendations u need to step ur earring game up. SWAG needs to get turnt up a whole LOT to make it in the industry, can't juss be living off ur cuz.
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